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Holidays are usually associated with spending nice time in a dream place and naturally with the beautiful weather. It happened to me - regret trip from Cracov. In 1999 I went with 7 members of my family to small coastal village. Those 2 weeks have been the worst in my life. If I could delete them from my memory I would do it. During first week I was meeting new people. I was 11 and I wasn`t pleased that in the neighbourhood there were mainly boys. After the week of hopeless searchings of my friends-girls I was content with spending time with my family. It was very boring! It was raining during the 2/3 of days of my stay there(coś mi tu nie pasi, ale nie wiem jak to zmienić). We were maybe 2 times on the beach without raincoats. I wasn`t tanned. I also wasn`t allowed to eat ice-creams beacuse I had a sore throat for a few days. My parents thought that I will(czy would?)be ill but fortunately it hadn`t happened. Near by our house lived our neighbour from Cracov, who I hate. She is very talkative and sometimes it becomes tiring. As far as houses are concerned - they also made our vacation diseaster. The bathrooms were common and they were located outside so we had to go out of the house in the evenings. Sometimes with un umbrella... As a family we had one, big, 3chambers house. Unfortunately there was nothing interesting inside. There were only standart equipment, even not including tv.(nie wiem jak to ma być:( - nie obejmujące nawet tv) I was disappointed, because as a 11 years old girl, I was accustomed to watchning programs about many of my idols. I feel marooned without RTV, but I put it up. What is more, I have aranchnophopia and there were a lot of spiders ! I was afraid of getting up from my bed when it was dark! They were even in a bath! Next bad thing , which I never forget is the food which was made by my aunt. My mum made herself a break from cooking. I can`t say in this issue anything positive. When we were packing up before home-coming - I was very glad. Today I start notice one positive aspect of that vacation - I have something to describe and I still think that there is nothing like holidays! (to ostatnie ma znaczyć - nadal uważam, że nie ma to jak wakacje :) ) I JAK???